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chelseyam
Chelsey Cheesecake
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Prof Hahn's Class 2007-the acid test

Ive seen myself in the mirror

Looked myself in the eyes

Gathered the meaning of life

Then forgot it

Ive seen the hollowness

Covered it with a blanket of hair

Theres nothing deeper than

Basic brain functions going on in there

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syncretisticsow Comment by: syncretisticsow - 2008-05-20 12:58
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I love this! Such a good understanding of the idea of denial, especially in response to personal interpretation and evaluation. Very simply, yet beautifully stated. Thanks for the nice read!
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