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TuckerWhite
TuckerWhite
United States, CA

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Joy Reeks

Lying smile
joy reeking from your
lips, you look
younger, fresher.
Does she do that?

A beat in my heart seeks
madness
adventure behind
blind eyes, detached.

Ideas of truth
twisted to
suit yourself.

You're not alone feeling
safe, when you deceive.
Desires satisfy,
demons and me.

As long as you feel
I remain.

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wellnessthruplay Comment by: wellnessthruplay - 2006-03-13 21:04
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Just wanted to say n i c e.
TuckerWhite Comment by: TuckerWhite - 2006-03-04 17:44
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Thank you for the title Kathy!! I'll take it!
Comment by: - 2006-03-04 08:08
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very good
Comment by: - 2006-03-04 03:41
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'behind blind eyes detached' ah thats very nice. Nothing constructive to add but yeh, this is very good.
Comment by: - 2006-03-02 16:36
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Great- a bizarro sort of contract in which two agree to pretend if the other does likewise while pretending there is no such pretense.
For a title (if you are still looking for suggestions) I was thinking "Joy Reeks" as it could be construed as a females name as well as being cynical as the poem.
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