phillip maguire
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United States, pa., middletown

Words:	13
Access:	Public
Comments:	4

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Rain Storm at Alan's

lightening flashes

rain dashes down

liquid mirrors

puddle the ground

splashing the sky

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Comment by: - 2008-06-26 15:20

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great work

Comment by: Boonrassi - 2008-05-25 11:22

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liquid mirrors

puddle the ground

//haha.. freakin terrific.

Comment by: Vision79 - 2008-05-20 21:37

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Short and sweet. I got the poem.

Comment by: Boonrassi - 2008-05-20 19:41

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(floating) fluid over the ground

//bit off to me..

splashes the sky

//awesome.. ill remember that a long time.
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