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summer 98
11 years old
Lost in the corn crops
Lets have an argument for the sake of it
Gold fish in the man made pond
Theyre as big as my 11 year old hand
Innocent existence
Everything was simple then
Everything seemed humane
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| we become horrible |
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Comment by: Qamar - 2008-07-11 04:24
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| indeed,childhood is great age. But what happens to all of us when we grow? We change. |
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Comment by: pitbull - 2008-06-04 03:41
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| It is not crap at all,,youve got more talent than you think..your work is great..the innocence is gone,beauty of not knowing the truth of the real world,is gone..we have to face the reality now..I luv it |
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| Thanks, I just try to write how Im thinking. I use bigger sentences when I think, Im not thick, but by shortening them I get the general idea across. Most things youll read were written in under 3 minutes. I appreciate the comments and the fact youre reading this stuff, I didnt figure anyone would. I think its a load of crap, but hey it cures boredom. |
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Comment by: Jorbian - 2008-05-21 21:09
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| You write so often like that. I like it alot. |
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