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fallenangel
Lexi Keegan
United Kingdom, Nottingham

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Barefaced Truth.

I want you to notice that my tears-turn-red
I want you to see the *bullets by my bed*
I want you to stop my lips turning blue
I LOVE YOU
I want to scream that

*whispers* {i l-o-v-e y-o-u}



I want you to care that i'm b r e a k i n g i n s i d e
I want you to stop me >crying at night<
I want your face to be the ((first)) thing I see.
LOVE
I need you to say that you me









l.o.v.e.

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Wildefriend Comment by: Wildefriend - 2008-08-24 13:35
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Odd poem--not really sure what the purpose of the asterisks or the brackets is. "b r e a k i n g i n s i d e" makes sense though.
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