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chelseyam
Chelsey Cheesecake
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Clearing it out

Im sitting there

cold sweat, dry throat, droopey eyes

saying all the wrong things, all the wrong things

waiting impatiently for this to be over

for my head to be cleared, active, intelligent again

im just waiting for unconsciousness to take hold

and im thinking all the wrong things, all the wrong things

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languidluna Comment by: languidluna Online- 2008-07-10 09:38
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fave part -- 1st line "i am sitting there" it's so detached, it's as though you are still sitting there in your memory. the repetition of "all the wrong things" is also really nice.
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