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FantasticFantasy
Raven just loves how everyone here ignores him.
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United States, North Carolina, Hillbilly Hell

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Emotion (faster!)

One day, one day
everyone
will see this heart I am wearing
on my sleeve.
One day, far away from now,
No one
will even remember me.

No one
ever
ever
can see me.
I feel as if I am
drowning
in a turmoil of words
that my pencil
isn't
fast enough
to record.

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bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-05-23 10:23
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Relate to your feelings-very good imagery. You might want to edit faster to fast-think that's what you meant.LTYA,Bebe
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe - 2008-05-23 00:05
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So good a poem it is! I like it very much. I will read more of your poems soon. Best wishes .
Jorbian Comment by: Jorbian - 2008-05-22 22:28
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It was okay. I guess.
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