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MsWizard
Alicia Wizard
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United States, WA, Seattle

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Miss You

Tossing
Turning
In an
Unfamiliar
And cold bed
Far too large
And empty
The sound
Of silence
Deafening
In my ears
Lonely
Alone
I feel
My tears
Trickling
Down my face
And the
Sheeted space
I lay in
Colder
By the moment …
… I miss you …

I’ve become
So used
To the sound
Of you
And the feel
Of your arm
Heavy
On my waist
As you bury
Your face
Deeply
Into my hair
Your breath
Warm on
Shoulders
Bared
For your
pleasures ….
… I miss you …

The morning rises
Bringing
Nothing more
Than the sun
On my face
And the empty
Space
Next to me
Wider
Emptier
And
Mocking
In cruel reminder
That
I miss you
… miss you …
… miss you …

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MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-06-04 09:21
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<<----has bared and cold shoulders at the moment...sigh...

Thank you Wanda....
WLC Comment by: WLC Online- 2008-06-04 09:10
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Your breath warm on shoulders bared for your pleasure--------so vivid and so ordinary, yet extraordinary, in emotion and sense--in that we've all felt that warm breath and long to always feel it. And miss it with every heartbeat when it's gone. Nice work Alicia.
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-06-02 19:42
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Yolanda, you are way too kind...thank you so much for reading and commenting~
YolandaRenee Comment by: YolandaRenee - 2008-06-02 19:39
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Okay, I'm done for the night. You had me at miss you! I tease, but I love your work and envy your talent!
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-05-28 12:26
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Thank you pj...I actually use the term "painting" when describing writing...because we really are painting on a canvas are we not?
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