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Not bad I see... But I'd like to make a religious statement here.. You see never pray to God for something this badly pray, that God do whatever that must be for my and everyone else's betterment... It's like a mother knows whats best for her child... If a child ask his mother for a knife obviously he won't get it... Same is the case with God
call on Jesus he'll make it all better and he may even give you want you want :P and if he doesn't then maybe he'll give you something else something better who knows but yeah call on Jesus :)
