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Arley
Arley Owens, Jr.
United States, Texas, Midland

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Sister (Out of Sight/Karjon 36)

She sits in a sterile environment, remembering; at least I hope she can. We can't reach her anymore, she probably won't even know we've come. Her affliction, defying physics and medical science, began in her early twenties. Two decades have since passed, yet no remedy can be found.

Mama weeps as Papa curses her fate. Bubba and Sissy barely remember when our beautiful sister used to play the piano and favor us with her magical voice. Wilford, her old beau, still hoping for a miracle, showed for the occasion.

Dr. Wills guides us into the viewing area and we all press towards thick glass, shielding her from contamination. Removing spectacles, he clears his throat. "I'm afraid it's not going to halt, this is most likely the last time you'll be able to see her."

Fierce sorrow engulfs me as I look at the tiny girl who once stood five-seven. Her luxurious yellow hair is now a mere spot, smaller than a match head, and two pin dots of blue appear to stare absently into space.

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Arley Comment by: Arley - 2008-06-02 06:18
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Thanks Karen! Never thought about it, but this really is a WEE one, heh heh. Sorry you're having to run around like a chicken with its head cut off these days.
karjon Comment by: karjon - 2008-06-01 12:58
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Ooooh - what an odd wee story (no pun intended), Arley. Really enjoyed that - thanks for the read.

Cheers

Karen
Arley Comment by: Arley - 2008-05-28 06:41
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Thanks Mike!
MikeMack Comment by: MikeMack - 2008-05-27 19:02
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Its curious and interesting to wrap the mind around. Not only the girl's horrid situation but also the condition of the family as she progessively worsens. Well expressed in such a short piece. Kudos.
Arley Comment by: Arley - 2008-05-27 06:22
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Thanks a bunch, Rupert!

Thanks Wanda! They can't communicate so they MC doesn't know if his sister can even still see.

Thanks Lee!
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