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PBlakey
Philippa Blakey
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United Kingdom, North Yorkshire, Scarborough

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shush you

no one looked after you yet
no one wrapped you
weak legged and lost for thoughts
in a new blanket
of acceptance
of lingering kisses

your head
sweet thing

is in my hands now

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Lander Comment by: Lander - 2008-05-24 06:23
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enough, already....

it's a pretty good poem.
PBlakey Comment by: PBlakey Online- 2008-05-24 06:23
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Well I like to think I can achieve sordid - given the right encouragement of course x
Lander Comment by: Lander - 2008-05-24 06:22
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yea, so many drakes around here chasing single females.
I guess she's the only femile in males and males....
PBlakey Comment by: PBlakey Online- 2008-05-24 06:17
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oops deleted the wild fowl comment by mistake x
Lander Comment by: Lander - 2008-05-24 06:17
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Thanks. My heads clearer, and a lot less sordid now. Or is it?
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