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phillmag
phillip maguire
United States, pa., middletown

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Rainbow Sun

ice crystals in

thin cirrus clouds

prism light to

a rainbow ring

around the sun

and farther

out another one

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Comment by: - 2008-06-26 15:19
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hey this is a very good complete poem
Boonrassi Comment by: Boonrassi - 2008-05-25 12:38
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lol.. i just said something about the sun burst quality of your tiny stuff and here it is again. this is awesome man. you painted spatial relationships in simple fashion.
nice.
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