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5351.85 Miles
It's been over a week since I last laid my eyes on you
My heart skips a beat everytime I think of my boo
This feeling for me is love of the highest degree
It's either 5351.85 miles or 5 days until this feeling is set free.
Every night since you left, I've had these intense dreams about you
Wondering if you even think about me, still want me, need me too?
It is nice to hear about all of the exciting times that you have had
Although not being with you at this time is making it all too sad
Love sick with thoughts racing through my mind
What are you doing now? Who are you with? are the kind
The temperature inside me is rising at an unprecedented speed
Help me find a cure for this love addiction, I beg, I plead!
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I like this and am impressed that you were able to rhyme it as well. An expression of intense longing for a lover who is far away. One minor issue, in the second to last line, should it be unprecedented rather than unprecedent?
Vagely reminds me of one I wrote a while back called "Longing" |
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"Love Life, Lust Life"
Love Life, Lust Life
Romantic Poetry
ISBN: 1413748554
Inspiration for the book came in many forms, starting out with the trials and tribulations of young adulthood to those of love and romance.
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