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JezzyWolf
Jezzy Wolfe
United States, Virginia, Virginia Beach

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H.E. Double Hockey Sticks (a teaser)

Blackness lifted.

“Where am I?” Paula blinked, struggling to see past the fuzzy gray blanketing her eyes.

A small girl with a dirty face and matted pigtails materialized at her right side. She leaned in close with a giggle and whispered in Paula’s ear, “You’re in H. E. Double Hockey Sticks."

A chorus of chuckles erupted from the sea of grubby faces encircling them. Paula was disoriented and apprehensive. “H. E. double hockey sticks? Do you mean...hell?”

“Ooo!” The chorus of chuckles morphed into chants of condemnation. “She said a naughty word!”

“No, I didn...”

WHACK!


(to be continued)

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Pamela Sweet Comment by: Pamela Sweet - 2008-10-09 11:28
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Nice work! Looking forward to more.
gilwaters Comment by: gilwaters - 2008-07-10 13:51
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Far too much of a tease... Not even enough to nit-pick about.
troyarn Comment by: troyarn - 2008-06-08 17:44
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yep, a teaser.
grimwriter22 Comment by: grimwriter22 - 2008-05-25 11:58
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i agree with the dead nome guy. lol. its good so far cant wait to read more
Deadgnome Comment by: Deadgnome - 2008-05-25 10:58
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Gotta love injecting children into horror genres, I think it will work, make it extra grim, but simple.
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