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Nothing but space between us
Nothing but holes within us
Sinking into your tranquil abyss
I find a place to resist
Somewhere I will long to kiss
A place to sit and to dismiss
Everything I try to get
Within the walls of this misfit
How could I know you?
Why I wouldn't want to.
Why I wouldn't try this.
Because there is nothing.
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It is deep, very moving. And I agree, the repeated 's' sound does make it sound like hissing, which adds to the words and makes them come alive even more. Very good!
