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pj
Manqoba Mkhize
South Africa, gauteng, jhb

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A black rose

A rose bloomed ,when the sun was swallowed by the river.
Darkness hide your beauty and your smile.
Mother nature wanted to keep you for her self.
Strange winds tried to blow your scent away.
Treatining your black tender petals before the river could vomit the sun.
A black rose that rose in the storny valley erect and full of life.Among the white lillies you stood proud
But you chose to die in spring, after the winter.
You sacrificed your soul for all flowers that i see now .Your beauty still reflects in them though i never saw you .Who has seen a black rose ?

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pitbull Comment by: pitbull - 2008-05-31 22:28
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Wow, got tears in my eyes..so powerful
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-05-26 11:37
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This is lovely.....
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