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Manqoba Mkhize
South Africa, gauteng, jhb

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overdose

One puff, and the white cloudy smoke fills my room.
The smoke in to my brain
another puff,reality is obscure.
i see figures in jelly like , form.
I float to a bleachy white room
Am in my own world i make the rules ,
noone judges me .Am innocent of any felony.
this is my paradise .
its only for moments
Reality strikes My head is pounding

I need a needle this time .
stick it in my vains and fly a little higher
stay longer this time .
My heart is beating ,racing too fast .
i cant breathe Am hot
i feel my skin burning .
My brain is about to explode ,Boom.
In the ally lying still as a steel pole

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