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Deby
Aoife De Buitléar
Ireland, Dublin

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Flesh

Delicate, fragile skin.
Soft, Smooth.
Paper thin.
The slightest scrape,
Of the sharpest blade.
And out pours the blood,
A waterfall.
A flood.
Thin as paper.
smooth as silk.
Cold as snow.
White as milk.
The blue and violet ribbons
That hide below that skin
Colourful blood flows through them
Still and untouched within

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Wildefriend Comment by: Wildefriend Online- 2008-05-26 13:47
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I realize that skin is a delicate thing...but...what about the way it looks--the way it smells. Why not entice us that way before we cut everything into oblivion?
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FC :-)
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