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MsWizard
Alicia Wizard
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United States, WA, Seattle

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Inspirations

I watched a movie
alone tonight

It was a sweetly
scripted saga
of a man and
a woman
of love
found and lost

A touching tale
that had me
asking myself
Will I ever
be in the
final manuscript
of someone’s story?

Will I ever
Inspire …
… a song of love
in all its glory?

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MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-06-05 15:02
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Hi Renee, not yet I haven't....do you have any suggestions?
YolandaRenee Comment by: YolandaRenee - 2008-06-05 14:55
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Great job as usual. Have you picked out the poems for your show?
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-06-02 22:21
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Thank you Matt...I thought you'd approve....
mattarnold Comment by: mattarnold - 2008-06-02 20:30
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"sweetly scripted saga"
way to clean up the inconsistant pair (simple saga) but keep the aliteration going. this even sounds better...m
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-06-01 20:06
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Thank you Drifters...I certainly hope so.....
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