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Jorbian
J. D. Boller
United States, Arizona, Prescott

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of the Lily

How fair is the lily? The fair princess of spring --
None dares upon her trod. Of the pond she is queen
None dares to disturb her. That is where none have been
None dares question her will. And that is what I sing

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chelseyam Comment by: chelseyam - 2008-05-29 18:47
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I was joking man, I was thinking of the Wizard of Oz the entire time I read it. Dont ask.
Jorbian Comment by: Jorbian - 2008-05-29 18:44
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It is supposed to be ambiguious...
chelseyam Comment by: chelseyam - 2008-05-29 10:04
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But...is she a good princess, or a bad princess :)
Jorbian Comment by: Jorbian - 2008-05-29 09:16
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I hope my alexandrine is getting better...
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