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jcp200817
Carlos Perez
United States, NC, Dobson

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This Is Not The End

Till the bitter end,
I will sit here telling you.
How much I loved you,
and how much I'll miss you.

This is not the end...

The last thing I want to do
before the end comes for us.
Is cry there next to you.
Oh baby please don't fuss.

This is not the end....

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troyarn Comment by: troyarn - 2008-06-02 03:48
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Yet another jagged edge slicing my emotions. I could feel what you were writing, Carlos. Great work.

And just to let you know? Sometimes it is the end, but usually we have control over it all. We just have to wait and see what we really want.

Thanks for sharing this. So few words...so much said.
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