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I have rarely
ever
heard of a love where
BOTH
hearts came out
unbroken.
I was like
Sampson
and you were like
Delialah.
You cut off my hair
and my heart.
Only one of us came out of that
"relationship"
without a broken heart.
I wish it would have been you.
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The last line really drives home a sucker punch to whoever the other person may be.
I can relate fully to this poem and I am sure many others can as well.
Job well done!
