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FantasticFantasy
Raven just loves how everyone here ignores him.
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United States, North Carolina, Hillbilly Hell

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Why Wouldn't You Help Me?

I came crawling to you,
ink pouring out
of my veins.
Writing is in
my blood,
you see.
And no one can
make it leave.
I desperatly
cling
for dear life
to your pant leg,
only to have you shake
me off.
You'll regret this one day.

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MaggieMay Comment by: MaggieMay - 2008-05-31 20:42
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hi,
There's an interesting emotion underlining this short poem. I like how his obsessive behavior and emotions is tainted slightly with resentment. Makes sense.
Interesting write.
peace,
MM
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