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pitbull
Kim Salone
Australia, NSW, Sydney

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THOUGHTLESS

Sitting here with you
Me and you
My thoughts
Imagination endless
Picture paradise
Where happiness surrounds
Another time
Another world
Of your own
New life
Which has chosen you
Close your eyes
Open them and see far down the street

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pitbull Comment by: pitbull - 2008-06-04 03:25
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Thanx PJ,yeah writing from my heart is very important to me..without it its like no writing at all..I am very emotional(in a good way that is)I am glad you guys like it,it means a lot..also thanx David, your comments are very much appriciated
pj Comment by: pj - 2008-06-04 02:15
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i enjoyed this keep it up you are in touch with your emotions and able put them in words again great work!
chelseyam Comment by: chelseyam - 2008-06-03 13:38
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I agree Kim, your thoughts are more important than trying to rhyme. I cant rhyme to save my life. Allen Ginsberg wrote that way.
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe - 2008-06-01 17:45
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Very good. I have noticed that you use whatever you think of to express yourself. I like your style very much. Please carry on.
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