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Nice analogy using punctuation and death.... I would have never thought of it. I soooooo want to fill in the blank. But it's meant to be blank so I won't.
wow.
hard to find words man..
i think its brilliant. stunning use of 21 simple words.
you might read my
The One of Us
sometime.
this is great Phil, i lingered over it for like 5 minutes. well, i still am i guess haha.. i love it.
thanks,
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