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jcp200817
Carlos Perez
United States, NC, Dobson

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Unconditional Love

Have you ever heard of
unconditional love?

Loving someone regardless
of what they may
or may not do.

I was once a believer
of this so called
Unconditional love.

But now,
I don't know
what to believe in.

Your promises
they meant nothing
to you.
You broke them
and along the way,
you broke me.

So take your petty
sorrow and your
"We can still be friends"

I don't want to see you
I don't want to hear you
If at all possible
I don't want to remember you.

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brokenwing Comment by: brokenwing - 2008-06-18 10:18
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Ah the knife in the heart of a lover's betrayal
troyarn Comment by: troyarn - 2008-06-02 03:40
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This one is edgy, the bitterness sticking out like thorns. Your words really brought out the bite as to the subject matter. Very good job, Carlos.
FantasticFantasy Comment by: FantasticFantasy Online- 2008-06-01 14:12
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a heart breakingly nice piece.
i've been there.
wait... is "heartbreakingly" even a word?!?
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