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fallenxstar
Teresa Lester
United States, KY, Mt. Sterling

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Welcome to Envys End

Begin:
A beautiful stranger, and I-
so udderly in lust
hopelessly hoping,
heavy heart in hand.

Frame by frame,
it all replays.
leaving me to bare the shackles of three
For a crime committed by one...
Pushed down, and broken
by the ungentle hand
of a man whos soul left him
before he ever existed.

Welcome to envys end, my friend.
I'm pushing you off of your cloud AGAIN.
(beauty thus become)

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DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe - 2008-06-23 23:35
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What a good poem it is! When I read it again, I find it is more interesting than before. Most people can notice falling stars, but few can remember fallen stars. In fact, it is the fallen stars that have put the sun in the sky. Best wishes.
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