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jcp200817
Carlos Perez
United States, NC, Dobson

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Can you see the pain?

As I look into
your eyes.
The ones that
captivated me from the
beginning.

I see
emptiness,
hollowness.
Your eyes
they seem dead
to me now.

You look into
my eyes.
Can you see the pain?
It's there
you should see it.

Your the one who caused it.

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YolandaRenee Comment by: YolandaRenee - 2008-06-02 16:18
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I not only see the pain -- I feel it! Good work!
Thank you.
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