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dunno.
Mumbling from surrounding rooms
Even when youre too weak to move its not gonna happen
A thought might occur if it can break through the wall
Better be careful though, thoughts still get heard
Cold shoulder for a week, but guilt for eternity
Curl up in a ball and brace yourself
It's not gonna happen, but neither is peace of mind
Sleep cant happen when the truth might escape
Unconsciously bellowing out inner demons
More mummbles from the wall
Whats honestly being heard?
Whats honestly being thought?
Its hard to be a hermit when no one knocks on the door.
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| Its not a typo, I had a slight problem with a slur that night :P |
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Mumbling* typo on the fist line :p
I emphasize with the last line, You can't be a hermit if no one realizes that you are even there. Makes me think of quantum physics, which usually isn't a good thing. Anyway, another great upload, look forward to reading more. |
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Comment by: Jorbian - 2008-06-04 13:35
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| As always you do a smashing job. Excellent work. |
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Comment by: pitbull - 2008-06-04 03:29
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I realy like this one,it is very honest and truthfull I especially like "A thought might occur if it can break through the wall
Better be careful though, thoughts still get heard
Cold shoulder for a week, but guilt for eternity
Curl up in a ball and brace yourself" Keep up the good work |
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