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phillmag
phillip maguire
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United States, pa., middletown

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Wandering Lost

**WANDERING*LOST*IN*TUBULAR*HOLLOWS*****
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**********R***********************************************
**********Y***********************************************
**********D***********************************************
**BEQUEATHES******************************************
**********Y*****O*****************************************
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***************NOTHING*********************************
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junenandy Comment by: junenandy Online- 2008-06-13 23:51
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Simply Brilliant.
Arley Comment by: Arley - 2008-06-12 06:17
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What an original idea, Phil! Too cool, dude.
alien Comment by: alien - 2008-06-04 06:59
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I like it!

That must've taken you ages to get the format right :D

Good start to the challenge. Thank you.
YolandaRenee Comment by: YolandaRenee - 2008-06-03 16:05
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Excellent, I liked it. Simple and yet very deep!
stopxlightxgreen Comment by: stopxlightxgreen - 2008-06-03 16:05
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I like your use of unconventional letter arrangement... very Apollinaire of you. It makes me want to look into crossword puzzle poetry.
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