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JPM
JP Mzimela
South Africa, Cape town, Cape Town

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My Lust

Dear you
Dear you, if I may call you my beloved.
If I may call you my dreams.
Dear you once again.

Do you remember our dreams?
I am still talking about our childhoods dreams
Ours my dear.
Do you remember them?

Things we supposed to do,
Dreams we shared.
The houses we built in our heads,
Yes the things we ought to do.

I went and bought the same furnishers without you;
I still went to eat at the same hotel;
Slept at the same lake;
Only hoping you will be there with me.


I am who I am today, because of you.
Can I ask you to be a flavor for me?
Can you continue and be my lust.
Dear you, again my lust, my long lost love,
May your soul rest in peaceful?

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YolandaRenee Comment by: YolandaRenee - 2008-06-03 16:04
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How sad and real. I still long for someone -- someone I will never have -- but do have my memories. Thank you!
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