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pitbull
Kim Salone
Australia, NSW, Sydney

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TOMMOROW WILL DIE

Why don’t you appreciate
The truth that comes within
Take it bravely like a soldier
And fight the pain that it brings out
There is no negativity
But honesty
It’s just life, let it roll
Let it all go and enjoy
While you can
Because tomorrow it will be over
For the first time
Live your life with no regrets
It is all meant to be
It was all drawn down on the paper
Long before you woke up
Walk with pride in your heart
Faith will prevail anyway
We have no choice
But to live on
Even though it is not perfect
But what is perfection
A definition of a dream
That will never end

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pitbull Comment by: pitbull - 2008-06-05 03:41
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I think its more like negativity=honesty..I believe people choose not to see the reality and accept it..live with it..thats life..aint easy but youve gotta get through
chelseyam Comment by: chelseyam - 2008-06-04 15:35
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honesty=negativity?
pitbull Comment by: pitbull - 2008-06-04 06:04
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thanx PJ,its amazing how you can make positive out of not so positive situations...
pj Comment by: pj - 2008-06-04 06:02
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There is not a hint of negative energy in this poem .I only feel a river of positive thoughts and energy flowing in your everyline lines i like the strong words of encouragement this poem brings out" live your life no regrets" thats beautiful !!!
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