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DavidHe
David He
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China, Pinliang, Pingliang

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Cat's Eyes on Water

Morning sun shines low
A cat sits on the lake bank
Eyes shrunk on water

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bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-06-16 03:55
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Haiku's are so hard for me & seem to come with great ease for you.
phillmag Comment by: phillmag Online- 2008-06-08 04:14
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another nice Haiku. i did stumble on shrunk but if that's what you saw, that's what you saw.
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-06-05 04:38
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Thanks, Heidiheimler. Your comment has encoraged me a lot. I will carry on. Best regards!
heidiheimler Comment by: heidiheimler - 2008-06-05 04:32
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A serene moment - yet you hint at so much more. Wonderful!
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