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Holding an Umbrella inside a Room

Heavy autumn rain
I hold up an umbrella
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Comment by: DavidHe - 2008-06-16 05:35

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Thanks very much, Bebelestrnage, for your nice comments. I will try my best to write better in haiku, but I would like you to help me. Best wishes.

Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-06-16 04:20

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Once again, another great haiku. Keep it up! My Best, Bebe

Comment by: phillmag - 2008-06-05 18:53

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Haiku kudos! another nice one.

Comment by: DavidHe - 2008-06-05 04:18

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Many thanks to you for commenting on this haiku. I think it is a great encouragement to me. I will try to write better. Best wishes.

Comment by: crows - 2008-06-04 21:22

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I really like this... it has a smell and a temperature associated with it. I love opening all my windows when I get to enjoy rain so that the rainy air rolls in and cleans out my house.

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