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Anytime, I'm yours
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This is a Song
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Whenever you want me
Whenever you need me
Whenever anytime
I’m yours
Whether you need a friend
Whether you need a lover
Whether anytime
I’m yours
Timekeeper hold me close
I don’t want to stray too far
Timekeeper don’t let his memory
Fade
Don’t let it fade
I need remember him
I need to remember us
Timekeeper
Don’t let me go
To whatever place you are
To whatever place I may be
I’m not far
No, I’m not far
Anytime
Yes, anytime
Anytime
I’m yours
When you feel like the world is closing in
Lonely in the life that choose you
Your view of the horizon
is seen from the twenty fifth floor
All you have to do is think my name
I’ll be there to silence your pain
You are never alone
Over and over
Again and again
Anytime
Anywhere
I’m yours
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Comment by: Azriel - 2008-08-15 19:09
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I hope one day someone writes something like this because of me lol But then again Im just being selfish :P
Im back Pandora, took two years but Im back... Nice to read your stuff again. Loves the one thing we can all sing about. |
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This takes me to a place mentally where I would love to be in reality.
I knew that you were talented but this poem makes me want to send you ticket and fly you to me just to have a date.
Please continue writting and sharing.
-db |
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| This is very lyrical. I liked it... I want you to become a member at http://www.whiteprose.com. |
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Comment by: Min - 2008-06-07 13:19
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| Why the twenty-fifth floor? Fredav has posted the bits I would want you to check. I feel there could be more to say on this one (I get the impression that it would be a very short song the way it gambols along). |
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Comment by: fredav - 2008-06-07 09:52
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Sheri.. missed you lots. You know, I've always been envious of how easy it is for you to write songs. Man. I remember before you posted one, and I was so amazed at how fluid it was, how effortless you made it seem.
Just a few suggestions:
-I need (to) remember him
-Lonely in the life that choose you (chose, maybe??)
-All you have to do is think (of) my name
Then again, maybe when this is sung, it'll sound way different. I like the feel of this, the romance, the promise of forever. This made me feel like the person knows exactly what he/she wants. Sigh.
-F |
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