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phillmag
phillip maguire
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United States, pa., middletown

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The Hidden

the unrevealed, unmanifested

the no-thing in everything

an un-carved block

of ten thousand things

a circle disarticulated

at its center

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scottishsong Comment by: scottishsong - 2008-07-06 12:45
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Everything starts from raw material, something that might be thrown out to the untrained apprentice. I love the block of ten thousand things because, again, it brings us back to the beginning of everything. Bravo, I love it.
Comment by: - 2008-06-26 15:23
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of ten thousand things

that is a hard line i think, but i love the poem

i would work on that line some

these are great poems
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe - 2008-06-05 18:40
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Very good poem! I appreciate your style very much. Why not comment on others' works? Please share your wisdom with other writers. Looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes.
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