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| Sweet and sentimental, hits all the right notes. Nice flow. |
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Comment by: pitbull - 2008-06-12 01:32
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| nice one..forming so many beautiful images in my mind..flows like a river.. |
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Comment by: pj - 2008-06-09 06:06
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| Thank you for your comments .I will try to rectify typos but am glad you enjoyed it. |
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| Oh pj I thought this was simply a sweetly sentimental poem and then I got to the last four lines and it is stunning, the last line in particular. This is beautiful. |
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| You give life to your poems-which makes the reader want more. Just a couple of typos-you'll find them when you read over it again. Thank you for such lovely words put out there for all to see. |
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