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Arley
Arley Owens, Jr.
United States, Texas, Midland

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Body Heat (Passion's Path/Karjon 37)

Ever so gently I brushed, garnishing the sweet glistening skin with oil, enhancing our forthcoming union. Each delicate stroke, evoking more arousal from within, made me feel like Rembrandt, so great was my inspiration.

Great God in Heaven I so looked forward to this consummation. I'd never anticipated such intense pleasure. Her parted mouth and hungry eyes silently conveyed her yearning; the desperate need for me to complete the task. An impatient sigh caressed my ears.

Heat rose like a living thing as I inserted. A wicked smile danced on my lover's lips. Lust; the sweet spice of life; portal to sensual paradise. The sweltering fires burned on and on, and then, at last . . . climax.

She cooed as I pulled the ham from the oven.

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Arley Comment by: Arley - 2008-06-25 05:43
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Thanks Karen! The second says it best, I think: purty danged anti-climactic, heh heh.
karjon Comment by: karjon Online- 2008-06-25 05:32
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Good ending or anti-climax? Sorry, couldn't resist.

Excellent, Arley - great descriptions.

Cheers

Karen
Arley Comment by: Arley - 2008-06-13 06:35
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Thanks Strange (seems strange calling you that couldn't find your name, heh heh)!
strangmagic1971 Comment by: strangmagic1971 - 2008-06-12 09:44
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I was expecting a saucy ending...but not in that context..lol i really liked it :)
Arley Comment by: Arley - 2008-06-12 06:07
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Glad you liked it, Brandy, thanks! Got me chuckling, heh heh.
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