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A Little Problem
“Toby! You got time to lean, you got time to clean!” Mack bounded forward efficiently. “Robbie! Come over here and help me with this shipment!”
Robbie bumbled and fumbled his way over to the large wooden crate Mack was referring to. Mack rolled his eyes.
Robbie gawked in awe of the enormous crate. “Don’t just stand there! Grab that crow bar and help me crack her open.”
The wood squealed as it peeled off the crate. The lid suddenly exploded off the box. Chimpanzees came hurtling out by the dozens. Pandemonium ensued.
Mack’s cell phone screamed up at him as he hid from the madness. It was Fred, the warehouse supervisor.
“Yeah, Fred!? We may have a little problem.”
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Comment by: karjon Online- 2008-06-25 05:50
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Great pace and very very funny image you've put in my head.
Thanks for the read and the laugh.
Cheers
Karen |
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Comment by: WLC Online- 2008-06-10 10:18
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Ha ha! Maybe that shipment was Toby and Robbie's replacements.
Enjoyed this. |
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| Chimpanzeess!!! smart little devils they are!!! and Mark that coward, HIDING at a time like that... smart little devil he is lol... well done... |
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Comment by: Arley - 2008-06-07 08:27
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| Great job, Vincent! Bumbled and Fumbled makes me ache for the start of the NFL season. It made me hear ol' Boomer yelling "Rumbling, Stumbling, Bumbling!" If you're not a fan, I'm referring to Chris "Boomer" Berman on ESPN. |
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Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-06-06 22:42
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| What a good story you have written! I like it very much. I have read one or two of your other stories and they are very good. Carry on! Best wishes. |
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