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MsWizard
Alicia Wizard
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United States, WA, Seattle

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Silk (revised)

Silk on silk
Satin cool
To the touch
Warming with
Familiarity

Prism-like
Opalescent
Shimmering

A soft hiss
Caressing enticing
Passions

A quick intake
Of breath
Temptations met
Chamois digits
Sliding
Gliding

In soft silhouette
Silk on silk ...

Thank you to the quiet voice of Euterpe ... a muse of lyric poetry, for your wonderful suggestions *smile*

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skypoetone Comment by: skypoetone Online- 2008-07-07 11:18
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Open interpretation... I can think of one that's inline with the story "Tipping the Velvet". I'll say no more about that except… phewwww!!! :)

As always, it’s a pleasure reading you Alicia.
~Tony
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-06-10 11:15
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oh pj, I can't tell you...it's all open for interpretation yes? *smile*
pj Comment by: pj - 2008-06-10 02:12
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lovely piece!What is the theme of this piece i want to be sure wether am on the same page with your thoughts
mikepyro Comment by: mikepyro - 2008-06-09 07:32
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great work. simple in its structure and work choice but utterly hypnotic in reading.
well done.
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-06-08 11:09
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Makes ME want to have someone disappear into the soft satin silk with me~
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