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alcarty
Al Carty
United States, New Mexico, Milan

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Two Bulls

Two bulls on a hill, admiring the heifers below,
Young bull, whistling bossa-nova, impertinent,
‘Look, dad, you’re bummin’ me out, man, just standin’ there,
Let’s run on down and score some chicks!’

Old bull squints and contemplates the scene, reflecting,
‘Fine, Toro, you flash your macho, scare them off,
I’ll stroll on over later, talk some trash,
And mingle, whisper, make them smile…

And before long, my young hormonal friend,
I’ll have them all. Watch and learn or…run along.

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alcarty Comment by: alcarty - 2008-07-02 08:11
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Thanks again, David.
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-07-02 00:40
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I like the story very much, old or new. For it interests any reader as it is. Great. Best wishes.
alcarty Comment by: alcarty - 2008-06-09 08:37
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Actually, the joke was that the young bull said 'Let's run down and get a quick piece.' The old bull replies,'Let's walk down and screw them all.' Thanks for reading, Les.
mynamelez Comment by: mynamelez Online- 2008-06-08 21:35
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Yes it is the old cliche that sometimes a calmer approach gets things done better, though it is also said that he/she who hesitates is lost.

Interesting if true.
alcarty Comment by: alcarty - 2008-06-07 13:51
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I cleaned it up a little for reader viewing. Thanks, Arley.
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