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easywriter58
Janyce Van Es
United States, Texas, Pottsboro

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A Little Problem

“Give me the wheel, you jerk,” Janyce shoved Johnny’s drunken torso to the left, causing the jam-packed motor home to wobble.

“No way. I hate your driving,” he spat.

She kicked his foot off the gas pedal and tried to find the brake with her own. The motor home missed the guardrail by inches.

“You are too loaded, John. We’ll never make it home with you behind the wheel.”

Janyce grabbed the keys out of their slot. The RV uncontrollably coasted down the hill. Both noticed lights flashing in the rearview mirror.

“Let me see your license and insurance,” muttered the officer with pen and pad.

Janyce handed him both.

He looked at the two, her lodged in his lap, “Who was driving?”

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karjon Comment by: karjon Online- 2008-06-25 06:01
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Great stuff, Janyce- I could see the scene quite clearly and it's a great punchline.

Thanks for the read and the laughs.

Cheers

karen
WLC Comment by: WLC Online- 2008-06-10 10:34
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Tooo funny! Fabulous last line!
troyarn Comment by: troyarn - 2008-06-09 01:04
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Oh the stories you have to tell! Good stuff here, Janyce. I can see the whole scene perfectly.

My brother happens to be in law enforcement and has mentioned a few weird stories, but none like this. Very entertaining.

Thanks for the read and enjoy your week!
lilgoldenray Comment by: lilgoldenray Online- 2008-06-07 17:08
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LOL... as bad as that is ... I have heard some crazy stories from friends who have driven drunk and we laughed till we cried... lol... GREAT story lol
mynamelez Comment by: mynamelez - 2008-06-07 16:44
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Who was driving whom? The mind boggles.

Great story. Really funny!

mynamelez
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