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colindardis
Colin Dardis
United Kingdom, Country Antrim, Belfast

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Plucked

The eyebrow curve
is the signal of night;
stalker’s rest
in his narrow grave
while greying skin
dries out the corpulence
of modern life.

The eyebrow’s arc
is a telling tale:
based on degrees
from the pupil
it regales forensics
of past lovers,
blue, bruised affairs,
festoon of romantic regret.

The coroner announces
his esteemed conclusion:
a broken heart
and the jape and jowl
of the corpse
collapses under inspection,
along with every facet
of the self’s hidden world.

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tinaleigh120 Comment by: tinaleigh120 - 2008-07-29 20:59
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very interesting, I liked it
mitra Comment by: mitra - 2008-06-20 21:51
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For some reason I kept thinking - face reading... hmm..
I'll go read again..
Glen aka FAD Comment by: Glen aka FAD - 2008-06-07 18:32
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Self measured in the words though life is given free will...
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