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| Nice little story -- I do like your work! |
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| lawl. mega-lawl. very funny. that movie was weird anyways. |
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Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-06-30 19:34
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| great creation! I like the short story very much. |
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Comment by: karjon Online- 2008-06-26 14:49
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Very funny ending, Phil, and a great Wee Story.
Cheers
Karen |
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I was getting all tied down trying to keep in my mind what all the technical words meant and then the last line made me just give up and laugh! I only found one mistake - 'Further anaysis' should be analysis.
But that's just a typo, there's actually no crit for me to make about the piece itself. |
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