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phillmag
phillip maguire
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United States, pa., middletown

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Robbed

tears ran down her face
like rain out of place
streaking her cheeks
and loitered on her lip
then she blubbered and sobbed
as though she were robbed
of her closest friendship

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bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-08-07 12:13
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Guess you can't go through life without witnessing a woman "robbed." Softly, painful Phil.
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-06-29 00:45
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This is short and to the point...and so very, very accurate....a lovely yet heartbreaking piece...
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