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nurseytonya
Tonya Lambert Bryant
United States

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The Outfit....All dialogue flash challenge

"Hi honey...You look like crap today."

"I feel like crap today. But thanks for pointing that out."

"Sorry baby. Is your stomache bothering you? You keep touching it."

"Yes, it is."

"Wait....what's this? A gift? A baby outfit? We gave up on trying because you were so frustrated, and you gave away all the baby clothes you had bought. Is it for your sister's baby?"

"No, it's for ours."

"Oh. Ohhhhhhh...."

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DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-07-02 18:34
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A very good ending. Why not comment on others' works? Best wishes.
easywriter58 Comment by: easywriter58 - 2008-06-08 19:35
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You posted this twice?
xXcreepylaughXx Comment by: xXcreepylaughXx - 2008-06-07 22:57
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hehe cute i like the ohhhhhs =D
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