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PBlakey
Philippa Blakey
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United Kingdom, North Yorkshire, Scarborough

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I won't go

its funny how the prettiest days turn out to be the saddest
its only warm outside

in here we float like silent bubbles
from one thing to the next

trying not to burst

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Johndeprey Comment by: Johndeprey - 2008-06-11 00:14
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Yes. I know the feeling. You express it uncomfortably perfectly. I like the irony in "funny" and in the playfulness of "bubbles".
Lander Comment by: Lander Online- 2008-06-08 11:34
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I like the tension in this.
Wildefriend Comment by: Wildefriend - 2008-06-08 07:26
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This is a very nice short work. It's brief and "to the point." And it's simple and not pretentious, (which is the best thing of all).
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