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DavidHe
David He
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China, Pinliang, Pingliang

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The Moon above the Mountain Bridge

No one walks across
The bridge between mountain peaks
Only the bright moon

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DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-06-23 02:19
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Dear Tina, thanks for the comment. Please keep an eye on my writing. I am sure I will improve it with your help. Best wishes.
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-06-23 02:17
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Dear Mick, thanks for the help with my writing. You are welcome to give me as much advice on writing. I want to learn from you. Best wishes.
cristinabejar Comment by: cristinabejar - 2008-06-23 02:01
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Haiku! Haiku! your images are beautiful!
Mick Comment by: Mick Online- 2008-06-17 03:07
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Cool David... The moon as the conveyer between mountain peaks... Nice Image. :)
bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-06-16 03:40
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Very unique & effectual!
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