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Pen bleeds black ink.
Forming circles ,curves
Lines and dots on a white paper.
Inscribing into words a picture
of sorrow ,tears and heartache
Creating a pefect reflection of
my broken heart into words.
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wow, this is what I am talking bout! this is phenominal! you are able to put in words the way you feel and it is so descriptive, with using only few carefully chosen words..I felt your pain while reading it..once again YOU ROCK!
so little wording...so much thought and emotion...being able to say how u feel short and bluntly is nice because in this day and age people dont have a long enough attention span to actually keep reading. i think u did wonderfully portraying your emotion...nice work.
