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Radioactive daylight
streams through my window.
God,
I WANT IT TO GO AWAY!
DON'T touch me!
My flesh begins to
melt,
everything hurts.
Close the blinds!
Please?!?
...
Someone...?
I understand now...
I smile as this
shining glass body
dissolves
into the clouds.
Insects swarm
and devour what is left
of my burned corpse.
This is why I don't like going outside.
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i like this one it seems like you are writing from the point of view of a vampire that has forgotten his sun block lol i really love the last line "this is why i dont like going outside." very well done piece of dark comedy
